In many western countries there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children.What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children?
The most
families in Correct article usage
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westen
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western
countries
has
been seen without babies.Change the verb form
have
This
is caused due to nuclear family infrastructure from adulthood which led to continue
and
survive without elder's advice and poor Change the verb form
continuing
famiy
consciousness.In my opinion,it is happening because of married one's goals,busiest life and no Correct your spelling
family
care takers
at home for the Correct your spelling
caretakers
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children
childrens
.Correct your spelling
children
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essay will discuss the justified possibilties
for the pros and cons.
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possibilities
Firstly
,increasing
population across the globe became Add an article
the increasing
the
serious issue to survive Correct article usage
a
pupil
.Fix the agreement mistake
pupils
This
is caused due to huge responsibilties
towards modern Correct your spelling
responsibilities
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children
childrens
.Highly
expectations influencing the budges of married couples.Correct your spelling
children
For example
,western countries
are occupied with heavy costs of education systems which is not worth to
normal pairs.Change preposition
apply
Ofcourse
,it is impacting to Correct your spelling
Of course
grow
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growth
the
upcoming generations.I thinkChange preposition
of the
,
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apply
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women
women's
womens
and Correct your spelling
women
mens
are both equally important to Correct your spelling
men
grow
the country's economic aspect.Wrong verb form
growing
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of genders would become Correct article usage
The imbalance
the
concern for Correct article usage
a
the
western Correct article usage
apply
countries
as there would be no youth to develop and innovate the future of families and country.I admit,having child
is a great Correct article usage
a child
resposibility
and Correct your spelling
responsibility
turning
point in everyone's life.
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a turning
Secondly
,it is beneficial as Add an article
a couple
couple
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couples
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to think
think
about Change the verb form
thinks
the
unemployment,poverty,Correct article usage
apply
crimes
which are the significant factors Correct word choice
and crimes
which
become Correct pronoun usage
that
the
threats Correct article usage
apply
for
the community.A lot
of expectations from today's teenagers.Enormous increasing population resulting into huge demands.To illustrate Change preposition
to
this
,in western countries
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children
childrens
are conditioning costly cellphones,Correct your spelling
children
motorcycle
,cars,heavy Fix the agreement mistake
motorcycles
pocketmoney
which is not worth Correct your spelling
pocket money
for
the poor pairs.Correct pronoun usage
it for
Unnecessary
burden to Add an article
The unnecessary
An unnecessary
fulfil
their wishes, it became Wrong verb form
fulfilling
challeging
to survive
couples.The full of Correct your spelling
challenging
facililated
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facilitated
facilitate
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children
childrens
led to dangerous addiction and misbehaviour conduct which create a bad scenario in society.To avoid Correct your spelling
children
such
a danger,people
usually choosing to have no kids.
In conclusion,selecting to not having
a family plan could be Wrong verb form
have
the
useful decision for Correct article usage
a
the
couples who are lagging Correct article usage
apply
with
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in
economical
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the economical
condition
.Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
However
,adding family
member
can become Add an article
a family
great
thing to teach human values and enhance the future of Add an article
a great
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family.Add an article
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