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Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of neighbor is the best to have?

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We are always surrounded by people, maybe at work or home or outside. Neighbours are the one who lives near to us and in
this
 case, I will prefer to have someone who is like us. In my opinion, I think
this
 way for two reasons, which I will examine in
this
 essay.
firstly
, I believe that when we have people of the same qualities around us, it becomes easy to mix with them. my own experience is a compelling example of
this
. my family experienced a short circuit in my house several years ago. It was a bad experience and it happened during the evening hours. at the time of cooking dinner. we all were managing to handle the situation. surprisingly our neighbour comes to our home. they
also
 bring the dinner for all of us. they even
also
 called the electrician to correct the issue. just after a few hours, our house lights come back and all feel happy to have
such
 a neighbour.
secondly
, In conclusion, I strongly believe that having neighbours like us is the best to have. Because of common interests and nature, it becomes easy to have a good bonding with them.
Such
 relation is easy to maintain and always gives us a positive environment.
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