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Some people think that they have rights to use as much fresh water as they want. Others believe that the use of fresh water should be tightly controlled by the government as it is a limited resource. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Water
 plays an indispensable role in our lives. Some people think that they can drink fresh
water
 to their heart’s content, while others believe that the government should control the consumption of limited
fresh
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water
 strictly.
This
 essay will discuss both views and explain the reason why I believe the government should limit the use of
fresh
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water
. To start with, if people keep using up
fresh
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water
 without control, the world will become a disaster for two reasons.
Firstly
, the problem of desertification will be aggravated
with
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 the lack of
water
, which will lead to the loss of trees and cause the
amount
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 of greenhouse gases being released
in
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 the air
increased
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 significantly, posing a threat to human lives.
Secondly
, it will be difficult for children to consume
such
 as
fiber
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 and calcium due to the fact that these can only be digested when they are dissolved in
water
.
As a result
,the authorities concerned should find some methods to control the use of fresh
water
 in order to prevent it from being exhausted.
For example
, they can enact the laws to impose a heavy tax on factories
which
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 are using
water
 excessively and raise the utility bills if households exceed the limitations of
water
 use.
In addition
, the officials can raise the public awareness of the importance of
water
 storage, and make
this
 a core lesson
on
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 the school curriculum so that children can develop a good habit of using fresh
water
 in a reasonable way.
Lastly
, people can reuse the
fresh
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water
such
 as recycling the
water
 to flush the toilet which is originally being used to do the laundry. In conclusion, the government should regulate the consumption of
water
instead
 of depleting
fresh
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water
.
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