Some people believe that teaching children a home is best for a child's development,while others think it is important for children to go school.discuss the advantages and disadvantages of home schooling and state your opinion.

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It is often urged that teaching
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good for
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childs'
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development ,while other believe that it is more important to go to
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.In my opinion, it is important to go to
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because
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provides enough resources than at
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.In my essay, I will discuss the positive benefits and
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negative
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-schooling.
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Home -schooling
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has many advantages.
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, at
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children
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learn
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the comfort of their homes.At
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home
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the learning environment has low pressure.
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alone while at
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you will be learning with
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a lot
of
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.
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result
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learning large numbers makes it difficult to get one on one learning with the teacher.
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,
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-schooling
it
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provide
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a chance for
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to spend time with their families.
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strengthen
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bond between them.
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,
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relationship
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will be strengthened.
On the other hand
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,there are disadvantages of
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learning.At
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home
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there are limited learning resources ,which will make it difficult to learn .
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,the absence of qualified teachers who will help a
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to understand.
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,learning at
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it
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reduces a
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's chances to create friends.
Children
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need the influence of their peers to develop well.
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,positive peer pressure ,
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helps them to make good decisions. In my opinion, teaching
children
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at
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help
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a
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to develop
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learning at
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. In conclusion,both
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and schooling
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in the development of a
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.

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