social media is becoming increasingly popular among all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantage of social media outweight the disadvange?

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Recently, the debate on whether the benefits of social
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outweigh its costs has been heated. Some
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argue that
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can build up relationships with
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around the world easier while others are worried that their personal
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may be leaked. As far as I am concerned, social
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sites bring more good than harm as
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can choose whether they want to expose their personal
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to the public.
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users can make friends with others who have the same interest as theirs on apps like Instagram and Facebook. As some elderly may only be able to talk to their neighbour
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reality, using different
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sites allows them to chat with more
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around the world despite their ages.
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, the elderly can share their baking experiences with some teenagers who are learning to bake.
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, social
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help
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to open their minds and communicate in a more convenient way.
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, it is undeniable that our privacy may be at risk when we are sharing too much about ourselves on the
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. It seems like the more we use social
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, the more we would want to share about ourselves.
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, we can see some vloggers are doing room tours on their youtube channels which can leak the location of their house. In
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way, our safety may not be ensured since users can search for our background and personal
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easily on the
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. To conclude,
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we need to pay extra attention to our personal
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while using social
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, the experiences of making friends and building up new relationships should be able to outweigh the risk. As long as we have the sense to protect our privacy, it should not be a big concern when we are browsing the
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