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In order to be successful at a sport, some think you must be physically strong while others believe mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#sport #think #strength
The maps illustrate the changes in a
village
 and a
neighboring
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 town named
Meadowside
 and
Fonton
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Font on
 respectively, since 1962, 1985 and now. As can be seen on the
map
, there have been significant changes in the infrastructure, housing, and facilities over the period given. The most considerable replacement is that
Meadowside
 has merged with
Fonton
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Font on
Fenton
. In detail, in 1962,
Fonton
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Font on
 and Medowside
village
were
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 located in two separate directions, the
first
 one in the east and the latter in the west. A small
road
 run through from the southeast to the northeast while a railway went through
in
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a
neighboring
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village
. In 1985, a small
road
 was replaced by the main
road
. Another main
road
 was erected in the southwest of the main
road
 and housing estate in 1985. A
village
 and a
neighboring
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 town are being developed gradually.
Meadowside
 seems more crowded than
Fonton
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Font on
, with the addition of a housing estate, the leisure complex in the west, and a super-store in the southwest of the
map
. If we compare the
map
 in 1985 and now, there has been a significant change in size as the
Meadowside
 suburbs and
Fonton
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Font on
 have been merged together, and a station has been constructed in the
center
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centre
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 of the area. A railway starts from the station and goes through
Fonton
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Font on
, paralleling the main
road
.
Furthermore
, a small hotel was erected in the north, while the business park was
also
 built in the north of the
map
.
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