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The population for India and China grew drastically. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

#population #india #china
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Dubai’s
gold
 trading in 2002. The data is expressed in
millions
 of
Dirhams
. Overall, there were significant fluctuations in the
sales
 of
gold
 in Dubai over the 12-month study period. It is
also
 clear that the country was able to post the highest
gold
 trading in March, while it recorded the least in July and September. In detail, there was a
slightly
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 increase in the
sales
 of
gold
 in Dubai from January to February, starting at 200
millions
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in
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dirhams
 in the
first
 month of the study and reaching about 250
millions
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dirhams
on
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 the
next
 month. The
sales
 of
gold
 in Dubai reached a peak of approximately 350
millions
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dirhams
 in March.
By comparison
,
this
 figure was almost two times as much as that recorded
in
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 the beginning of the study.
However
, the
gold
 trading in the country declined rapidly in the succeeding four months, sinking to a low of more than 100
millions
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dirhams
 in July, which was almost identical to that documented in September. It can
also
 be seen that there was an erratic pattern observed from July to August. The latter figure steadily maintained its
sales
 with almost 200
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dirhams
 until the final month of the survey.
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