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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

#people #choices
There are some
people
 making the general assertion that
people
 these days have countless choices for living. The world has changed dramatically compared to
as
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what
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 it was 100 years ago. I completely agree
that
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apply
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with
this
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these
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statements
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statement
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. It is undeniable that there are more inventions that provide more
options
 to us. Nowadays, everything is easily accessible due to the spread of technology, especially for the shopping and
people
 get the desired product with a few clicks. As it is a wider platform that provides a lot of
options
 considering the price,
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and color
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color
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 for a great number of choices .To cite an example, Amazon is an online store that provides an abundance of
options
 to customers as the same products are sold by hundreds of merchants. Another rational justification is that Food is one of the primary needs of human beings.
During these
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These
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 days we can have too many
options
 for
this
 basic necessity as well.
The
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A
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 wide variety of choices is available for all
kind
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kinds
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 of ages from toddlers to older
people
. In
olden
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the olden
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 days baby food was simply made at home from ingredients available in
kitchen
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the kitchen
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 while department stores
full
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are full
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 of baby food today. In conclusion, It is totally true that we have a huge number of
options
 in most areas of our life and they sometimes mislead us and make our choice too difficult. In order to avoid these
disadvantages
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,disadvantages
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 we should learn to recognize our real needs,
values
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and values
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 and make
a
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the
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 right choice from the diverse
options
 available.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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