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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

#people #time #loss #species #plants #animals
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technology develops, people are manufacturing products by using
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 of natural resources to use in different aspects so it can cause environmental problems and these are becoming a threat to
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 age of life. On the one hand, the loss of particular animal and plant species will result in an imbalanced ecosystem. Pollution of the air, water and soil
caused
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 by toxins and gases released by factories, combustion of fossil fuels and industrial waste.
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, Marine
animal
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animals
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 are
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 killed by
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the water
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 population that happen
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 amount of waste and hazardous waste is produced and dumped in the oceans.
Moreover
, Loss of trees in order to make space for residential, industrial or commercial.
On the other hand
, we should not ignore other significant environmental related issues since they are threatening
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individual
life
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 around the globe
such
 as
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overpopulation
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over population
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overpopulation
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 and global warming .As a consequence of
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 global population, people are facing a shortage of resources
such
 as food, water and fuel, particularly in developing countries.
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, the greenhouse gases emission from human activities
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 as burning fossil fuels for electricity, heat, and transportation etc. lead to global warming, which can cause unsafety of people living by increasing
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temperature
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then
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 sea levels, melting of polar ice caps, flash floods and desertification. To conclude,each subject has its own advantages to learners
that is
 the reason they are concluded in the school's curriculum.
However
, considering all of these reasons above, I have to say that technology and science are more imperative for pupils than history because from my perspective they can definitely be utilized in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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