Some people think that the best way to reduce the time spent traveling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The Precedence of Parks and Gardens in the modern world as compared to massive infrastructure which was always a hotly debatable topic has now become more controversial. while copious people claim that in order to reduce the rush and traffic congestion on the road it will be advantageous to demolish the public playland
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argument according to numerous people for the sake of cutting down the time spent on travelling for their work to later part of the Linking Words
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or by replacing old buildings and museums. to exemplify, A survey report indicates that more than 70% of plants and trees and the public Use synonyms
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have each year cut down in favour of housing and work projects.
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argument I think is more rational owing to plentiful reasons Linking Words
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replacing public properties with the building directly impacts not only the congestion but Linking Words
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somehow reduce the carbon emission pollution. To Illustrate, Islamabad is the capital Linking Words
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as monuments, heritage and millions of folks visit that Linking Words
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across the globe.
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