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Many young people leave school with a negative attitude towards learning. What are the causes of this? Suggest some solutions.

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Nowadays various students are finishing
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schools
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 with not only basic knowledge but
also
 and even more important with a less positive perception about the learning. The roots of
this
 are numerous and all are linked to pedagogy theories and the new role models that children are having. In
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 I will explain some of
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 causes as well
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 alternatives to fight the undesirable phenomena.
Although
 schools have tried to modify some didactics with the
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 of the years there are still some theories that have been implemented for educators and should
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such
 as the theory of behaviourism which
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establish
 punishments when undesirable
conducts
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 are observed.
Thus
, when students fail on their exams or misbehave the only method used by teachers is
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 them in public or forbid privileges. It only develops a negative attitude
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 pupils about their learning processes and does not improve their knowledge.
For instance
, a child who after mistaking gets a prohibition of their favourite activities never will love to learn.
Furthermore
, it is lucid that the current role models are always against
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education and
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 to the adolescents the idea that they can obtain money and luxury
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life
lifes
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 without academies, so now the young people wonder why they must learn something new if it is not necessary.
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 of
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 of teenagers wanting to be
youtubers
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YouTubers
 and
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 the school.
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this
 way, the solutions are all
focus
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 on changing the perspective,
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 the pedagogical perspectives, and understanding that the youth is now different and creating conflict between them and the educational processes is not positive at all. It is time to teach them from their interests and encourage them to find
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 the learning process joy opportunities with transversal projects. An example of
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Emiliana
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 approach which
propone
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to teach
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 from the child's interest, Though it requires
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harder work by the teachers
also
 will modify the students' perspective. To conclude, the reasons why pupils are getting each day
further
 from appreciating their learning are all linked with the lack of pedagogical focus and the
unapropiated
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unappropriated
 use of the very classic theories. For that reason, if education wants to
envolve
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 learners
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 their process and inspire them to participate actively it is required an immediate transformation.
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