Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Along with the industrialization and modernization of the world, environmental issues are

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the biggest concerns of

humans

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. Some argue that more and more

plants

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and

animals

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are on the edge of

extinction

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, and it is the most alarming phenomenon. Meanwhile, others believe that other environmental

problems

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should be seriously taken into consideration. I side with the

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idea as I believe that

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issues are not only about the

extinction

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of living species but

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about other concerns. Apparently, the increasing loss of living creatures may severely have negative impacts on the

Earth

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. As all

animals

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- including

humans

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- and

plants

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are meant to coexist to create a balanced and diverse ecosystem, when some species become extinct,

people

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may have no materials to study or explore in the future.

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, the

extinction

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of some creatures

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leads to other species’

extinction

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.

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, as dodo birds digested seeds from

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named Calvaria

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after

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type of bird vanished, the

trees

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mentioned above were incapable of germinating seeds.

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is an alarming issue and

humans

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should not let similar situations happen in the future.

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, there are

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some other worrying environmental

problems

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including: deforestation, air

pollution

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, water

pollution

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, extreme natural disasters, etc. They are somehow interrelated since the consequences of one issue can be the causes of other

problems

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, too.

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, deforestation happens when

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cut down

trees

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to build houses and factories, and

trees

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are the natural shield that

protect

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humans

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from natural disasters including

flood

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floods

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,

storm

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storms

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,

landslide

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, etc. Without forests or

trees

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, the weather may become more and more extreme,

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Earth

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will get warmer rapidly, which can negatively affect

humans

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’ lives. Some environmentalists may argue that the disappearance of plenty of

animals

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and

plants

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is the main concern nowadays.

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,

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argument is wrong.

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is just one problem arising from recent ecological issues, and there are more serious ones that

people

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should pay attention to. Air

pollution

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, noise

pollution

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, global warming, etc. They all equally have negative effects on the

Earth

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in comparison with the

extinction

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of some particular species. In conclusion, the loss of some kinds of

animals

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and

plants

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can lead to various challenges.

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,

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should not totally consider it the main environmental issue that

humans

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are facing. I believe that they should be more aware of other ecological

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apart from the

extinction

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of living creatures. By acknowledging

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, the environment

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Earth

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can be preserved and able to recover to become a green planet again.