Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Along with the industrialization and modernization of the world, environmental issues are

also

among one

of

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the biggest concerns of

humans

. Some argue that more and more

plants

and

animals

are on the edge of

extinction

, and it is the most alarming phenomenon. Meanwhile, others believe that other environmental

problems

should be seriously taken into consideration. I side with the

second

idea as I believe that

ecological

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issues are not only about the

extinction

of living species but

also

about other concerns. Apparently, the increasing loss of living creatures may severely have negative impacts on the

Earth

. As all

animals

- including

humans

- and

plants

are meant to coexist to create a balanced and diverse ecosystem, when some species become extinct,

people

may have no materials to study or explore in the future.

Moreover

, the

extinction

of some creatures

also

leads to other species’

extinction

.

For example

, as dodo birds digested seeds from

trees

named Calvaria

trees

,

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after

this

type of bird vanished, the

trees

mentioned above were incapable of germinating seeds.

This

is an alarming issue and

humans

should not let similar situations happen in the future.

Nevertheless

, there are

also

some other worrying environmental

problems

including: deforestation, air

pollution

, water

pollution

, extreme natural disasters, etc. They are somehow interrelated since the consequences of one issue can be the causes of other

problems

, too.

For instance

, deforestation happens when

people

cut down

trees

to build houses and factories, and

trees

are the natural shield that

protect

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humans

from natural disasters including

flood

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floods

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,

storm

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storms

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,

landslide

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landslides

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, etc. Without forests or

trees

, the weather may become more and more extreme,

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Earth

will get warmer rapidly, which can negatively affect

humans

’ lives. Some environmentalists may argue that the disappearance of plenty of

animals

and

plants

is the main concern nowadays.

However

,

this

argument is wrong.

This

is just one problem arising from recent ecological issues, and there are more serious ones that

people

should pay attention to. Air

pollution

, noise

pollution

, global warming, etc. They all equally have negative effects on the

Earth

in comparison with the

extinction

of some particular species. In conclusion, the loss of some kinds of

animals

and

plants

can lead to various challenges.

However

,

people

should not totally consider it the main environmental issue that

humans

are facing. I believe that they should be more aware of other ecological

problems

apart from the

extinction

of living creatures. By acknowledging

this

, the environment

as well as the

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Earth

can be preserved and able to recover to become a green planet again.