Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Since ancient times, environmental

issues

have played an important role in

the

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society's attention. Some argue that the

disappearance

of a number of different

species

of

animals

and

plants

is the most serious environmental

problem

, while others claim

otherwise

. In my point of view, I believe there are more serious problems than the loss of particular

species

animals

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and

plants

. On the one hand, the

issue

of the extinction of some

species

is not actually the main environmental

issue

because some other

issues

are more pressing.

First

, some

people

believe that one of the main environmental problems today is tackling the

greenhouse

effect

phenomenon. Because

people

are suffering really serious

consequences

related to

life

such

as natural disasters, floods, and droughts that are caused by the

greenhouse

effect

.

For example

, thousands of

people

die from natural disasters each year in the world.

This

clarifies the real need to solve the

problem

of the

greenhouse

effect

immediately so as not to negatively affect human

life

.

Second

, an equally serious

problem

is that the atmosphere is threatened by growing urbanization. When some toxic gases are released from factories, vehicles greatly affect the depletion of the ozone layer.

This

affects the breathing of what is considered an inevitable part of sustaining human

life

.

Therefore

, things that directly affect human

life

and

life

are considered the main and urgent

issues

in the field of the environment.

On the other hand

, many advocate that

humans

need to focus on the

problem

of many

species

of

animals

and

plants

that are disappearing. They argue that humanity has a moral obligation to protect the existence of different

species

of

animals

and

plants

in order to protect ecological diversity for later generations.

For example

, they assume that in less than four or ten years, their descendants would no longer see pandas, or that at

this

time young generation would no longer see the appearance of the Tasmanian Wolf, which is considered a native

species

in Australia.

However

, the

consequences

of the loss of a few

animals

such

as dinosaurs are

also

part of natural selection, thanks to the evolution of nature,

humans

can live. Some argue that the

disappearance

of some plant and animal

species

has an impact on medicine when a large part of them may be precious medicine.

Nevertheless

, with the modernity and development of science and technology,

humans

today can still artificially breed to maintain the existence of certain drugs or for medicinal purposes.

Therefore

, the

disappearance

of some plant and animal

species

can be not the most urgent thing in environmental concerns.

In other words

,

people

need to prioritize

issues

related to human

life

and ways to prevent the serious

consequences

that those problems bring. While it is still necessary to pay attention to the

issue

of extinction of some

species

of

plants

and

animals

, it might be not urgent and the main

issue

. In my view, there are still some animal or plant

species

that have a lot of loss of specific

species

of

plants

and

animals

that do not adversely affect

humans

. Attempts to restore the atmosphere, or minimize the

greenhouse

effect

,

also

have a positive

effect

on the habitat of these

animals

and

plants

. In short, environmental

issues

are challenging and may have serious

consequences

on the daily lives of every citizen but the

disappearance

of some

species

cannot be a central

issue

of environmental concerns. I believe that improving other pressing

issues

related to human

life

at the same time

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protect the

species

and

plants

on the brink of extinction.