Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In
the
recent decades, along with the development of technology, Correct article usage
apply
environment
protection has become a highly controversial topic. Replace the word
environmental
This
has possibly created conflicting viewpoints, especially among environmentalists, on whether people should pay attention to the decline in Linking Words
number
of some peculiar Change the article
a number
the number
species
or other ecological Use synonyms
issues
. I believe the loss of various animals is an important problem, Use synonyms
Linking Words
however
there are even more crucial environmental problems to be concerned about.
To commence with, one of the most alarming problems is global warming, which can be seen as the root cause of most other Add a comma
,however
issues
. It is the main factor Use synonyms
of
the temperature increase of the oceans and the earth’s surface, which is the origin of a number of natural disasters Change preposition
in
such
as flooding, melting of polar ice caps and the rise in sea levels. To elaborate, Venice, a famous city of Italy built on small islands, will be underwater by 2100 if the acceleration of global warming is not curbed. Linking Words
Hence
, the detrimental impact of global warming could possibly put humans in jeopardy.
It could be claimed that the loss of various Linking Words
species
is the most important problem because of Use synonyms
Remove the article
apply
the
Correct your spelling
them
it’s
negative effects on human life. Correct your spelling
its
This
argument states that the disappearance of some creatures would cause Linking Words
the
imbalance Correct article usage
an
of
the ecosystem since almost every fauna and flora has a specific role. Change preposition
in
For instance
, the overpopulation of rabbits in Australia in the 20th has destroyed land and crops, Linking Words
led
to soil erosion because of the lack of natural enemies. Correct word choice
and led
Therefore
, in Linking Words
theory
at least, each Add a comma
,theory
species
has a vital role in our daily life.
Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
this
environmental argument oversimplifies the Linking Words
issues
. Not every Use synonyms
species
has been proven to have a direct impact on human life so the disappearance of these creatures would not be Use synonyms
considerably
influential. Replace the word
considered
On the other hand
, Linking Words
issues
related to global warming or environmental pollution directly affect people. Use synonyms
For example
, the emissions, which are released Linking Words
to
the air by the usage of fossil fuel, Change preposition
into
is
one of the reasons for respiratory diseases Correct subject-verb agreement
are
such
as asthma, chronic bronchitis or even lung cancer.
To conclude, climate change is clearly Linking Words
the
major threat to our planet. Correct article usage
a
Although
the extinction of animals and plants is a conundrum, the influence of climate is more straightforward to the biosphere. A better approach is to encourage people to use eco-friendly products, Linking Words
an
adaptation to the environmental consequences of the former industrial economy.Correct your spelling
and
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