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some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #choices
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Decision-making is an important issue all the time for
people
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 in all parts of the world. It seems that the
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 of
choices
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 is increasing nowadays and
people
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 may affect by them. I think it is true and it has some benefits and drawbacks which I will discuss in
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 essay according to social and practical effects.
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 with,
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 have a lot of
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 in social life these days. There are a large
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 of locations and apartments to rent or they can choose a good city to live in.
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, there are numerous groceries or food types that
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 can buy every day.
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 may cause some merits and demerits for citizens.
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, in the case of groceries,
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 can buy a lot of fruits, vegetables, and ingredients and cook types of cuisine.
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, it can increase consuming culture and produce more waste than past.
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, the
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 of
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 in the practical part of
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’s life is increased in recent years. The different majors in a large
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 of universities make chances for everyone to attend courses and follow their education.
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, job opportunities are aggressively increasing nowadays, especially in developed countries and young
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 have several
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 for occupation. It may cause some problems for those who have not learned decision making and make pressure on them. In my opinion, in
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 era, the amount of data and
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 are very large and it is essential to learn about choosing the best options. In conclusion, I agree with some
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 who believe that
people
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 have several
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 in different parts of living.
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, in my opinion, it would not have negative effects If we learned decision making.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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