Nowadays shops tend to stay open longer hours every day of week. Is this a positive or negative development?
It is believed that
markets
concentrate on staying widely
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wide
day
of the week. This
essay will discuss both of benefits and drawbacks sides of opening department stores for a longer time. I do not believe that stores are not open longer hours per day
of the week.
To begin
with advantage of markets
that open longer hours every day
of the week. The first and foremost reason is that the majority of people would like to have some supermarkets rather than long-distance markets
like Bazar and some like this
. For ,example some public who are so
lazy and do not want to go to a Bazar, would prefer to visit a Rephrase
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nearly
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instead
of going out aloud
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markets
. As a result
, it is related to a person's personality and behaviour, therefore
it is acceptable for these kinds of people, rather than a long-distance outlet.
On the other hand
, attempting to get a better idea of disadvantages
of staying a Correct article usage
the disadvantages
much
time each Correct word choice
long
day
, there are several reasons for making furious populations. The main reason for this
is some markets
are really unnecessary for inhabitants because these types of boutiques only take place,,
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furthermore
government should focus on that some unnecessary showrooms should expand to other buildings like business centres, course centres, and banks as well. Add a comma
furthermore,
Consequently
, it will be beneficial for all of us to be able to make good decisions.
To sum up
, from my perspective, the government and population
should concentrate on these factors to keep Correct article usage
the population
the
good conditions for citizens who are looking for something else towards Correct article usage
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