Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to help him/her to move explain how exactly you can help ask him/her some questions about the new house

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Dear John, Hope you're fine and happy. I'm happy to listen that you're shifting to a new house. As I know, your father and elder brother are out of the city nowadays, so you just need some help to carry goods from the old apartment to the new one.

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, you can tell me if you need any kind of help. Fortunately, I have a loader vehicle these days and I think give it to you easily.

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, I can drive the loader, so it would be better if I take it to your residence with some friends. They will help to load heavy goods like safes, beds and so on. So, frankly speaking, it's my responsibility to help you in

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situation because you helped me when I shifted to my current apartment. In the end, I have some questions regarding your new residence because I

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plan to change my house in near future. Can you please tell me the exact cost of your house? How many daily life facilities are available in that area? I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Mahmood Hafiz.

Submitted by mahmood.hafiz2272 on Mon Apr 11 2022

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Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to help him/her to move explain how exactly you can help ask him/her some questions about the new house

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this case ? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development ?

In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?

It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenager. Therefore , Physical education and sport should be compulsory for all the students in all school. What do you think?

some people belive that unpaid community service should be a compulsary part of high school programmes. to what extent do you agree or disagree