Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People

have differing views with regard to the question of what the root causes of most

crimes

are, the

problems

related to our society,

such

as impoverishment, or the bad

nature

of the criminals. While it is undeniable that poverty and other social problem could lead to

crimes

, I believe that it is the

nature

of the criminals that prompts the illegal activities. Possible reasons will be discussed in the following essay. There are two main reasons to support those who agree with

people

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money issues or social

problems

.

Firstly

, unemployment is highly associated with steal and robbery. As

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consequence of the development of technologies,

people

with little or lower education or skills are more likely to lose their jobs and less likely to be recruited. Under the desperate desire

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money to support their families, they tend to get involved in

crimes

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industrial revolution could be a typical example of

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Secondly

, some social

problems

such

as discrimination could

also

play a significant role in offences.

People

might have wrong recognition of themselves because of their particular skin colour or nationalities, which could mislead them to

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the opinion that both their value and power are higher than

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;

therefore

, assaults, injuries,

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murder occur.

However

, I would agree with those who believe that bad

nature

is the main cause of

crimes

.

Firstly

, lack of money is only the trigger of

crimes

, not all the poor

people

would hurt others

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because their moral baselines would not allow them to do

such

things.

Secondly

, lots of

crimes

, especially economic

crimes

happened among the wealthy group, the only reason

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explain

this

is greed. Even

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procession is much more than others, they never feel satisfied.

Last

but not the least,

people

with

violence

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tendencies usually hurt other

people

without any

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. Some researchers have shown that

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people

with violent

nature

usually are not able to control themselves to be peaceful, and they assault others without any conscious. In conclusion,

although

poverty and other social

problems

could prompt

people

to break the laws

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some extent, my own view is that

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bad

nature

,

such

as greed and violence, is the initiator of

crimes

.