Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that play
activity
is a way forward to improve public health
, while other parts of people think sports
has a small impact on health
and various other activity
would be necessary. This
essay agrees that sports
alone are not the answer for public health
, but different approaches could work.
Health
cannot be achieved through physical activity
such
as playing sports
, but good dietary knowledge and the consumption of healthy food is also
an
important factor. Research suggests mental and social well-being are equally important factors too for a person to be called fit. Even though an individual is the best football player, and is anxious about small things cannot be considered healthy. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, a study conducted by The Times in 2019 showed that in countries such
as Japan, which is famous for its sports
population is 75% affected by mental health
disorders.
Sports
activity
definitely plays an important role in promoting good health
, because it involves entire body movement and stimulates the brain to focus on one goal. However
, does not give knowledge about good eating habits and how to socialise well with people. As a result
, all aspects of factor such
as knowledge, awareness, mental health
support, etc is crucial to becoming a healthy individual.
In Conclusion, Health
is a state of social, mental and physical well being and not merely one factor i.e Physical (sports
).Submitted by kartikay19 on
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