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in some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are the advantages and disadvanteges of giving children this massege?

#cultures #children #disadvanteges #massege
In
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various
culture
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cultures
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,youth are advised to
do
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work hard to
fulfill
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 anything.children are always following the words of elders.so it would
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 to
child
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the child
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.In
this
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 it has both merits and demerits. The merits of advising the
child
 to do anything are they will do work hard and succeed in
there
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their
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 life.working hard
are
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 the key
of
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 success as goes.Elder people always taught
right
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the right
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 things to
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the child
a child
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child
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children
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 to have
bright
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 future. Without
advised
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advice
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 there won't be
motivation
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 to do anything.
For instance
,if
a
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he or she
want's
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wants
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 to be
doctor
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 ,should praise that
your
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you're
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 doing great .And so that
child
 would sacrifice their sleep to
fulfill
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fulfil
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their dream
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dream
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dreams
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.Sacrificing
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sleep
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a sleep
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asleep
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 for timing will have
joyful
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a joyful
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 life. To have sweet
at
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later ,
first
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 have some bitter. The demerits can be risky to
youth
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 future.
Do
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 anything means Never
knows
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knowing
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child
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a child
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 can do anything
in
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at
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 cost of life or doing crime.It doesn't mean
elderly
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 are always right.For
simple
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 example like,during
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exam
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exams
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 they will cheat just to get good results.Or they may do black business to earn .And do you know that distraction
of
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 sleep can cause mental problems
.
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They may not sleep to do something which can cause
for
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long term duration. To conclude the
poin
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point
plain
 that different cultures are taught
to
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youth to do anything to
fulfill
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fulfil
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a dream
the dream
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dream
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dreams
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.So it can
be defers
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be deferred
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 to
child
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the child
a child
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 to take advice in good
ways
 or either wrong
ways
.If they take in good
ways
 it would be beneficial in their future and if they take in bad
ways
 they may land up in prison or unsuccessful.
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