Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults who commit crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that
criminals
that are minor should undergo the same treatment as adult criminals
and, this
essay shares the same opinion with their argument.
To begin
with, there are some negative points in that argument. First
and foremost, underage criminals
might not fully understand the consequences of their crimes. To be specific, it is wrong to commit a crime
in the first
place but, there is a big difference between people committing a crime
despite fully understanding the impact of crime
and who do not. Underage criminals
, considering their immature nature, are more likely, in the latter group. Moreover
, It can be harsher punishment compared to adult criminals
. To elaborate, younger criminals
have more days to live after the punishment and, it would be difficult for them to be employed considering their formal convict status.
However
, there are also
some positive points to the argument. Firstly
, the age of criminals
does not change the severity of crimes. There is a reason for the Justice system installed a statue with a blindfold. It represents the just system should be fair and equal. Secondly
, it can be unfair to the victims of the crime
. For instance
, there would be a situation where people who lost their family member to a minor might have to watch the convict gets away with relatively weak punishment.
In conclusion, there are some positives and negatives to the statement. Nevertheless
, this
essay argued that because of the fact that justice needs to be fair to all, youger criminals
should be treated in the same way as adult criminals
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