Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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time,

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is

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of the means of transportation since it is commonly popular in every country.

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,

this

is

one

of the safest

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of transportation to get

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quickly and comfortably so

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why the

railway

is paid

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important

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.

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, most

of

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the individuals prefer travelling by

car

instead

of

train

.

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is

one

of the

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why the road should be even and

good

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quality for travelling in

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way

. There is the statement that

governmental

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budget should be spent on

railways

rather than

roads

. I totally agree with

this

citation since affordable

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and technical safety characteristics of

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the train

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train

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are good reasons for improving

railways

rather than

roads

.

Firstly

, not everyone can purchase cars or pay for

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taxi

. Since

,

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the

train

is cheaper than

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a taxi

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or buying petroleum for the

car

,

railway

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should be paid much

attention

by the country's administration. To illustrate , in our country the cost

for

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is twice cheaper

than

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taxi

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.

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is really advantageous

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for students , who can purchase affordable

way

of

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transportation

.

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,

railway

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is

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proper

way

for

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destination

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, travelling from my hometown to our capital Astana is comfortable by

railway

rather than by road because it is not safe to travel by

car

for

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destination

.

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, countries should pay

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enhancing the quality of

railways

by raising money

to

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it. The

next

reason, travelling by

train

is safer rather than by cars since cars can be broken any time .

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,

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is safer due to

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driver

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will manage the movement of the

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so that passengers can safely and calmly travel without worrying that they could be frozen

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cold.

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, by statistics ,

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is being happened

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than incidents on

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railway

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due to

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train

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trains

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.

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, during

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or freezing weather the chance to have

car

crash is more expectable

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to

train

. So, safety is

one

of the most significant

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for everyone since

from

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it the life of human beings is dependent.

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is

one

of the most important

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why

railway

should be paid off much

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than

roads

. To conclude,

railway

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and

roads

are both vital for people getting

their

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destination

.

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,

railway

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has advantages over the road

such

as good

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and

safe

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way

of transportation. If the government raises money for

railways

than

roads

,

less incident

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fewer incidents

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injuring

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community's life

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would happen.

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, middle class or families with low income who can not purchase

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car

or afford

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can get

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to

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and easily get

their

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destination

.