Some people think that the best way to reduce the time spent traveling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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A great deal of
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is being wasted daily by spending
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getting held in traffic jams or commuting. Some people are promoting the idea that green
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should be cut for the expansion of residential
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to accommodate people near their
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work places
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while others do not consider
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idea as a perfect solution.
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solution can reduce
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wasted
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significantly, I am completely in disagreement with it. The following essay will look at both views followed by my notion. On one hand, replacing green
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close to downtowns, where the business area of a city is usually located,
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buildings can make dwellers'
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better.
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, they can walk to those places, sleep more in the mornings, and spend the
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they save on enjoying their lives, which all result in their physical and mental health.
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usually means a less commuting
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and a better usage of land in favour of its settlers.
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, trees are playing an increasingly important role in clearing air pollution and decreasing noise pollution.
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, in developed countries trees are being planted along highways to protect the neighbourhood from air and noise pollution.
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, bringing people closer to city centres might be preferable to keeping gardens, but it suffers from the disadvantages that lead to making city centres even more polluted.
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, green
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are essential parts of cities that should not be demolished. To conclude, the expansion of living
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in downtowns by cutting down trees can reduce commuting
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. Even though the importance of being close to work offices should not be underestimated due to the subsequent improvement of humans lives, I believe that the destruction of green parks can not be a practical solution because it contributes to the decrease in air quality.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • commuters
  • urban areas
  • housing availability
  • alleviating housing crises
  • public transport
  • traffic congestion
  • environmental health
  • biodiversity
  • recreational
  • mental health benefits
  • urban heat islands
  • green lungs
  • community interaction
  • cohesion
  • innovative urban planning
  • multi-use buildings
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