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More and more people are moving from rural areas to cities in search of a better life, but city life has its own problems. What are these problems? Suggest some solutions

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In the modern ,world
people
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 are interested to live in the
city
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. Nowadays
people
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 are increasingly moving from the countryside to
city
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 life to find a luxurious life. Generally, cities
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 are facing some difficulties and village folks are unaware of the real problem faced by them.
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 essay will discuss the problems faced by the developed locations and some possible solutions to overcome
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 issue.
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 with, developed areas have some limitations like huge population, cost of living and cultural deviation, etc. Many
people
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 are interested to live in the
city
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 for various reasons like Children's education, finding more job opportunities, etc.
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, they struggled to get settle into modern society. The cost of living in the
city
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 was higher than in the countryside.
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cultural deviation is one of the most problems faced by the residents who live in their
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.
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, one of my friends who lives in a village moved to an urban area for his job. His son was grown up in western culture and did not give respect to his grandparents due to
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 cultural barrier.
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, even though there are more difficulties
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 are moving to urban places for their own purpose. They have to understand the clear vision of
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 life before coming to conclusion. They have to consider precautionary steps to be taken before making their decision.
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, I move to my hometown for job purposes. I educated my kids about our own culture and the story of my family background. In conclusion, it is really fine to move from village to
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 for their own purpose. In my opinion,
people
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 should think about the problems in urban areas
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 before making a decision.

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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