Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In terms of globalisation, youngsters are trying to have an individualistic approach,
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, it is believed that
traditions
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of each
culture
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should be obligatorily followed.
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essay will discuss preserving the historical and cultural moments of nations and the freedom of choice of young people. Would it be possible to unite both strong individual views and traditional folk beliefs? I partly agree with the assumption as consider that it could be possible for each individual should be free,
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remember about their own roots.
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and foremost, youth are the hereditation of each country, they should preserve
traditions
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as it is an essential part of history and the
culture
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. Youth ought to know their origins and genetic materials for discovering their potential.
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, overcoming alcoholism is peculiar for European cultures genetically, but the Kazakh public is threatened by the alcohol condition. Another pattern related to history, Kazakhs lived on the steppes and were riding and eating horses, nowadays
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heritage has been inherited with Kazy and some horse games
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as 'Kyz Kuu' and,
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, Kazakstan
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is still thriving and maintaining its own ethic.
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, young society is only beginning their lives, discovering the beauties of the world. There are several religions, countries and languages. According to a freedom of life, each person could prefer to choose his/her own way of living and behaviour.
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, youths could move from their hometown Asian -speaking country to European English -speaking country choosing Buddhism and it would be their choice. In conclusion, preserving the nation is related to the inheritance of
traditions
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from older people to young,
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, genetics plays a huge role in who people are. Oppositely, freedom of life is a basic rule in everyone's lives. In my opinion,
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are not restrictions to living independently, the main is to memorise what are the origins of each
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as historical essence.
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