Some people think that recruiting companies should aim to take on people who are innovative and able to work independently while others consider they should recruit people who are able to work in a team and follow instructions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some
people
believe that
companies
have to focus on employing staff who have
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in
work
and are able to solve any problem independently
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, others argue that they are responsible
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recruiting folks who have been made for
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teamwork
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team
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work
so as to pursue instructions. In my point of view employing
people
who are best for
team
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work
can bring major profit for the
company
. One justification for
companies
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have
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a tendency
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to recruit
employee
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employees
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with
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teamwork
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team
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teamwork
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work
skill
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skills
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is that they are able to communicate with
the
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others easily and, overcome many possible
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difficulties
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in the
company
so as to make the best decision.
For example
, someone who has
ability
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the ability
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to
work
with the other
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colleagues
may
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have
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better
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function during the bad circumstances.
Moreover
, another nuance that should be taken into consideration is that
people
who are made to
work
with the other staff are more likely to be a socialized
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people
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which is
required
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a required
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factor in any
company
. Some others believe that it is better for
companies
to employ someone who is
quailified
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qualified
enough to do many tasks alone as a multi-task
person
.
That is
to say,
professional
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person
in every
company
is needed with unique ingenious methods for every single instruction.
For instance
, IT computer engineers should be able to be
a
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creative
persons
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as much as possible in order to do their duties.
furthermore
, the best
solary
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solar
salary
usually dedicated to a
person
who has
capability
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the capability
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of working independently because they can do the tasks of more than three
people
. In conclusion,
companies
are investing
on
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their staff for remarkable
accomplishment
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accomplishments
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.
Although
there are many
diffrent
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different
approaches when it comes to recruitment, we have an unwritten rule which says a group of
people
think better than a single
person
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • innovative
  • independent
  • creative
  • problem-solving skills
  • development
  • new ideas
  • solutions
  • productivity
  • competitiveness
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • communication
  • consistency
  • adherence
  • policies
  • conflicts
  • efficiency
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