Some people think that recruiting companies should aim to take on people who are innovative and able to work independently while others consider they should recruit people who are able to work in a team and follow instructions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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believe that
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have to focus on employing staff who have
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and are able to solve any problem independently
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, others argue that they are responsible
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recruiting folks who have been made for
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teamwork
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team
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teamwork
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work
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so as to pursue instructions. In my point of view employing
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who are best for
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work
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can bring major profit for the
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. One justification for
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which
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have
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a tendency
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to recruit
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employees
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with
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teamwork
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team
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teamwork
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work
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skill
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skills
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is that they are able to communicate with
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others easily and, overcome many possible
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in the
company
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so as to make the best decision.
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, someone who has
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to
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with the other
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colleagues
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better
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function during the bad circumstances.
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, another nuance that should be taken into consideration is that
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who are made to
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with the other staff are more likely to be a socialized
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person
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people
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which is
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a required
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factor in any
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. Some others believe that it is better for
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to employ someone who is
quailified
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qualified
enough to do many tasks alone as a multi-task
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to say,
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person
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in every
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is needed with unique ingenious methods for every single instruction.
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, IT computer engineers should be able to be
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creative
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as much as possible in order to do their duties.
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, the best
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solar
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usually dedicated to a
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who has
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the capability
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of working independently because they can do the tasks of more than three
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. In conclusion,
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are investing
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their staff for remarkable
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accomplishments
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Although
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there are many
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different
approaches when it comes to recruitment, we have an unwritten rule which says a group of
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think better than a single
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • innovative
  • independent
  • creative
  • problem-solving skills
  • development
  • new ideas
  • solutions
  • productivity
  • competitiveness
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • communication
  • consistency
  • adherence
  • policies
  • conflicts
  • efficiency
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