People have different expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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have always had different preferences towards their careers and while some of them tend to have a lifetime
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in one company, others are mostly
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hoppers. Personally, I believe neither of them is favourable and it may be better to change our
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but not frequently and too much. On the one hand, having the same
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may cause mental relief for some
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. They do not need to worry about the competitive
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market because once they find one, they stick to that to be retired.
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population usually wants to avoid the stress and pressure of unemployment and prefers to have a full-time
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with a stable salary.
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, they may afraid that if they quit, they will not find another
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in a short time and have to deal with financial problems.
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attitude may cause them to be experts in their
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as well because they have a routine for a long time and they will get familiar with every aspect of that.
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, there is another group of
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that change their
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frequently. I think
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group are more curious and adventurous. They usually find it boring to have the same
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and prefer to tackle new challenges. Usually, they learn different skills but not as much as a professional.
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, they may learn programming, translating, accounting and so on due to the variety of experiences that they have while they are not experts in any of them. Another reason for
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-hopping is that they may not know their desire and if they find that, they will become a long-term employee. To illustrate, a person can have several interests
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as photography, academics, engineering etc. and
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, do them all for a while and become an engineer in the end due to his/her interests and talents. In conclusion, both types of
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whether staying in a
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for a long time or changing that frequently, have different reasons but, in my view, it is better to experience two or three various jobs.
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