The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand , it also isolates us and encourage people not to socialize. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
The
internet
is one
of the advanced technology which is extremely popular in the present time. Due to the internet
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,internet
people
can download any movies, materials
, browse Correct word choice
and materials
online
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the online
catalogue
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catalogues
subscribe
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and subscribe
for
diverse Change preposition
to
services
. Moreover
, browsers such
as Google, Google Chrome, Correct your spelling
Yandex
Yendex
can provide quickly downloadable materials for Correct word choice
and Yendex
internet
users. However
, in
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at
present
time concerns Correct article usage
the present
regarding
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apply
that
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the
internet
is
isolating society from communicating with each other Correct subject-verb agreement
are
being
raised despite the fact that Add a missing verb
are being
high -speed
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high-speed
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is available everywhere and allowing
individuals to keep in touch in any Wrong verb form
allows
places
. I totally agree with Fix the agreement mistake
place
this
statement and this
essay will explain the reasons for that.
Firstly
, the community are getting additicive
to Social Media and varied Correct your spelling
additive
addictive
websites
so that this
distracts them from getting touch
not only with their acquaintances but Change preposition
in touch
also
their
family members, To illustrate, since there are so many movie streaming Change preposition
with their
websites
where folks can enjoy watching movies for free, this
distracts and isolates them from hanging out with their friends and callling
and chatting with their families on Correct your spelling
calling
frequently
basis. Change the adverb
frequent
Moreover
, the internet
is proposing so many opportunities to
online shopping , ordering food online and even processing Change preposition
for
payment
online so the population is randomly getting Fix the agreement mistake
payments
soaicilizing
and seeing each other. Correct your spelling
socializing
For instance
, personally
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,personally
to interact
and Change the verb form
interacting
meet
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meeting
people
outdoor because I can accomplish and order all my needed services
at home without interaction with others.So, plethora
of free Add an article
a plethora
the plethora
websites
and online services
separate individuals with
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from
others
.
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other
Secondly
, the Internet
is so virus
currently that Fix the agreement mistake
viruses
people
forget which
the reality is. As an Correct pronoun usage
what
example
we can Add a comma
,example
this
with social Add a missing verb
do this
websites
such
as Instagram where persons
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people
demonstrating
every Wrong verb form
demonstrate
their
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the
steps
of their life Fix the agreement mistake
step
instead
of going out and talking to each other by phone . Moreover
, video -calls which are available due to the Internet
make Correct your spelling
unnecessary
unnessary
for human beings to meet up.Correct pronoun usage
it unnessary
For instance
, one
person located in one
city far from other city
can have Change the wording
another city
other cities
conference
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a conference
instead
they can arrange Add an article
a conference
conference
or video Fix the agreement mistake
conferences
call
and Fix the agreement mistake
calls
also
social media replace people
's live chat and meetings.
To conclude , the internet
is one
of Correct pronoun usage
apply
powerful
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a powerful
the powerful
tool
in our lives. Fix the agreement mistake
tools
However
, internet
is setting apart Add an article
the internet
people
from each other even though it is available everywhere. I totally agree with this
, since free websites
, social media,online services
and diverse apps make peope
to be isolated. If the Correct your spelling
people
internet
is still popular furtherly, the community will get used to online life and automated services
and application . As we this
with pandemic
situation , because of the Add an article
the pandemic
a pandemic
Internet
the world easily overcome the worldwide lockdown and get used to being apart from each other easily.Submitted by zhadym on
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