The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand , it also isolates us and encourage people not to socialize. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The

internet

is

one

of the advanced technology which is extremely popular in the present time. Due to the

internet

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people

can download any movies,

materials

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and materials

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, browse

online

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the online

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catalogue

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catalogues

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,

subscribe

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and subscribe

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for

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to

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diverse

services

.

Moreover

, browsers

such

as Google, Google Chrome,

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Yandex

Yendex

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and Yendex

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can provide quickly downloadable materials for

internet

users.

However

,

in

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at

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present

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the present

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time concerns

regarding

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apply

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that

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the

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internet

is

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are

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isolating society from communicating with each other

being

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are being

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raised despite the fact that

high -speed

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high-speed

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Internet

is available everywhere and

allowing

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allows

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individuals to keep in touch in any

places

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place

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. I totally agree with

this

statement and

this

essay will explain the reasons for that.

Firstly

, the community are getting

additicive

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additive

addictive

to Social Media and varied

websites

so that

this

distracts them from getting

touch

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in touch

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not only with their acquaintances but

also

their

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with their

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family members, To illustrate, since there are so many movie streaming

websites

where folks can enjoy watching movies for free,

this

distracts and isolates them from hanging out with their friends and

callling

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calling

and chatting with their families on

frequently

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basis.

Moreover

, the

internet

is proposing so many opportunities

to

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for

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online shopping , ordering food online and even processing

payment

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payments

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online so the population is randomly getting

soaicilizing

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socializing

and seeing each other.

For instance

,

personally

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I started rarely

to interact

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interacting

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and

meet

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meeting

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people

outdoor because I can accomplish and order all my needed

services

at home without interaction with others.So,

plethora

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a plethora

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of free

websites

and online

services

separate individuals

with

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from

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keeping in touch often with each

others

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other

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.

Secondly

, the

Internet

is so

virus

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currently that

people

forget

which

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what

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the reality is. As an

example

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we can

this

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with social

websites

such

as Instagram where

persons

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people

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demonstrating

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every

their

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the

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steps

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of their life

instead

of going out and talking to each other by phone .

Moreover

, video -calls which are available due to the

Internet

make

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unnecessary

unnessary

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it unnessary

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for human beings to meet up.

For instance

,

one

person located in

one

city far from

other city

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another city

other cities

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can have

conference

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a conference

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call by using different apps.So, ones don't need to meet with each other

instead

they can arrange

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a conference

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conference

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conferences

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or video

call

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calls

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and

also

social media replace

people

's live chat and meetings. To conclude , the

internet

is

one

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apply

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of

powerful

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a powerful

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tool

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tools

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in our lives.

However

,

internet

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the internet

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is setting apart

people

from each other even though it is available everywhere. I totally agree with

this

, since free

websites

, social media,online

services

and diverse apps make

peope

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people

to be isolated. If the

internet

is still popular furtherly, the community will get used to online life and automated

services

and application . As we

this

with

pandemic

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the pandemic

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situation , because of the

Internet

the world easily overcome the worldwide lockdown and get used to being apart from each other easily.