The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand , it also isolates us and encourage people not to socialize. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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internet
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is
one
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of the advanced technology which is extremely popular in the present time. Due to the
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internet
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people
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can download any movies,
materials
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and materials
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, browse
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,
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diverse
services
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, browsers
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can provide quickly downloadable materials for
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users.
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in
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present
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time concerns
regarding
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internet
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isolating society from communicating with each other
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raised despite the fact that
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Internet
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is available everywhere and
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individuals to keep in touch in any
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. I totally agree with
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statement and
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essay will explain the reasons for that.
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, the community are getting
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to Social Media and varied
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so that
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distracts them from getting
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not only with their acquaintances but
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their
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family members, To illustrate, since there are so many movie streaming
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where folks can enjoy watching movies for free,
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distracts and isolates them from hanging out with their friends and
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calling
and chatting with their families on
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basis.
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, the
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is proposing so many opportunities
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online shopping , ordering food online and even processing
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online so the population is randomly getting
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socializing
and seeing each other.
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I started rarely
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and
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people
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outdoor because I can accomplish and order all my needed
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at home without interaction with others.So,
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of free
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and online
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separate individuals
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keeping in touch often with each
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.
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, the
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is so
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currently that
people
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forget
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the reality is. As an
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we can
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with social
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such
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as Instagram where
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demonstrating
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every
their
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steps
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of their life
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of going out and talking to each other by phone .
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, video -calls which are available due to the
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make
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unnecessary
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for human beings to meet up.
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,
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person located in
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city far from
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another city
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can have
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a conference
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call by using different apps.So, ones don't need to meet with each other
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they can arrange
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a conference
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conference
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conferences
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or video
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and
also
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social media replace
people
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's live chat and meetings. To conclude , the
internet
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is
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one
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of
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a powerful
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tool
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in our lives.
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,
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internet
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is setting apart
people
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from each other even though it is available everywhere. I totally agree with
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, since free
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, social media,online
services
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and diverse apps make
peope
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people
to be isolated. If the
internet
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is still popular furtherly, the community will get used to online life and automated
services
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and application . As we
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with
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the pandemic
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situation , because of the
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the world easily overcome the worldwide lockdown and get used to being apart from each other easily.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • connectivity
  • geographical distances
  • real-time communication
  • social media platforms
  • remote work
  • social isolation
  • screen time
  • emotional intelligence
  • digital divide
  • echo chamber
  • diverse perspectives
  • online and offline balance
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