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Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

#businesses #employees #lack #skills
In
this
 contemporary world, apart from
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academic
knowledge
, it has become essential to have additional communication
skills
 that can help
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the youngster
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youngster
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youngsters
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 to settle down in various office
environment
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environments
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. In numerous office
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cultures
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culture
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,culture
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 it is found that the
new comer
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have
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dearth
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a dearth
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knowledge
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of knowledge
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 on cooperation.
This
 essay will discuss the top-notch causes of it and solutions for
such
 issues.
Firstly
, passed out students from colleges are mainly having
the
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disciplinary
knowledge
. They are very much occupied with their academic course that they do not have enough time to develop other activities that can be helpful to them in their job.
Secondly
, most
of
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the
companies
 are not having
proper
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a proper
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 welcoming
program
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programs
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 due to which candidates may feel reluctant to openly converse with their
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teammates
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team mates
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teammates
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. They may feel isolated and could not make
himself
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themselves
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 compatible with others by joining them.
For example
, many software
companies
hires
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 a plethora of workers for
backup
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a backup
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 plan and put them on
bench
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the bench
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. They are not introduced to the
team
 until they find any suitable project which may
creates
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 a communication gap.
Hence
, the new joiners are not able to cultivate cooperative
skills
 in starting phase of
job
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the job
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.
However
, the training can be the appropriate way to fill up the required
skills
. It should be highly recommended in job
post
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 about
such
 mandatory
skills
 so that students make themselves prepared for
such
 talent by joining professional coaching.
Moreover
,
companies
 should have
better
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 environment for the new employees either by introducing them to other
team
 members or by
trained
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 them in-house before putting them
in
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team
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the team
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.
For instance
, Infosys,
a giant software
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giant software companies
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companies
 having
their
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 own training
center
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 for freshers where they train them for six months with all
such
 required
skills
.
Likewise
, one can be more friendly and cooperative in corporate culture. To conclude, it is found that certain communication
skills
 are difficult to adapt
in
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 new office culture for
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newcomers
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new comers
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newcomers
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 in some
of
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the businesses. The root cause of it can be
lack
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a lack
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 of
knowledge
for
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such
 talent or the hesitancy felt in
new
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a new
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 environment.
Nevertheless
, it can be overcome by providing appropriate training to them.
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