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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, there are numerous food and drinks
products
 contain a lot of which has bad for your energy and cause many matters of health. It is recommended that sugary
products
 should sell more expensive to encourage humans to consume less
sugar
 to protect their health.
This
 essay will give causes for my answers and cover any examples from my own knowledge and experience I totally agreed that should be made high-price to encourage citizens to use fewer carbohydrate
products
. One of the reasons is to avoid plenty of harmful diseases. If society
use
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uses
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 eatables and drinkables containing high levels of carbohydrates, there will a higher blood pressure,
then
 they can lead to many
illness
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illnesses
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,
such
 as inflammation, weight gain and so more. Social statistics illustrate that 70% of citizens around Vietnam got diseases related to the digestive system, which is very dangerous to their health.
For example
, old people using too many
sugar
products
 will get a harmful sickness and accelerate the ageing process. To solve
this
 issue, the government not only made it more expensive to encourage people to consume less
sugar
, but
also
 make
this
 to education. Every child when studying in a school should be learned about the disadvantages of using too many a glucose
products
, to make a piece of knowledge for their own students,
then
 they can avoid
this
. From my point of view,
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 should be a substantial way to change consumer behaviour. In conclusion, sweets and many
products
 including
sugar
 bring many critical problems;
however
, each individual should have an awareness to keep healthy and avoid the cause of serious diseases.
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