There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the transport company. In your letter: • Describe the problems • Explain how these problems are affecting the public • Suggest some changes that could be made

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Agapi and I am writing to you as I thought you should be informed about the issue regarding public transport that my village has encountered during the
last
six months.
To begin
with, there are a few means of transportation in my village. People have to reach from one destination to another by taxi. Since
last
year we have a new line to commute to desired places but buses arrive once an hour which brings the number of problems to citizens. To visualize the full matter, I must add that the number of queues is increasing day by day in the bus stations. Those who work are late and could be fired from their positions, while others have appointments and to reach in time they take a taxi which is too expensive. I suggest new regulations must be brought in to improve public transport.
For example
, we could set a new schedule for bus frequency or hire more drivers to shift and not get tired. I hope we can agree on a solution to these problems. Yours sincerely, Agapi
Submitted by asatryan.agapi on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: