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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?

#people #technology #relationships #development
Today, the forms
people
aproach
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approach
 each other have changed due to
technology
. Some of the forms
technoogy
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technology
 has affected are relationships with a faster way of communication by reaching each other all over the
world
.
This
 is a positive development because society
have
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has
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 wider
oportunities
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opportunities
 to meet
people
 without leaving their homes.
Technology
 is one of the faster communication because it takes seconds to connect with one another. By clicking a tab, within a
seconds
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few seconds
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, you will have access to attend class or
meeting
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meet
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 new friends.
Moreover
, most of these internet connections are free to use. The
second
 form that
technology
affect
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affects
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relathionships
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relationships
 is by connecting
people
 all over the
world
 due to the instant connection that
internet
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the internet
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 provides.
Hence
, students can
enroll
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enrol
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to
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on
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 classes without leaving their homes. To support my point, during
this
 pandemic situation
in
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The United States
do
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does
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no
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not
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 offers in-person classes;
however
,
thank
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thanks
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to
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the
technology
 many students were able to connect
eventhough
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even though
 they were living
oversees
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overseas
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.
As a result
, schools all over the
world
 were able to keep their schedule without losing their educational program. The way
people
 interact
have
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has
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 changed because of
technology
 and
this
 is positive development by giving us wider
opportinities
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opportunities
 to approach
people
 or places within seconds. it
is well know
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is well known
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 that there are programs that offer classes
through
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apply
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online
twenty four
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twenty-four
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 hours a day because
people
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from
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form
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from
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another continent
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other continents
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 are willing to teach at
very
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a very
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 low cost. On top of
this
, individuals have the opportunity to know many places because of the internet. To explain
further
, many students have known each other
by
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through
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 online apps
eventhougn
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even though
 they are not living in the same country.
As a result
, crows have wider opportunities for meeting
people
 or places without
traveling
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travelling
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 or spending money. To conclude, the way
people
 interact
have
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has
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 changed because of
technology
 and
this
 is a great growth for the
world
. Without a doubt,
this
 modification
brough
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brought
 more opportunities to develop our society as well as
individual's
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individual
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 development.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Interact
  • Social media platforms
  • Networking
  • Instant messaging
  • Face-to-face interaction
  • Misunderstandings
  • Emotional context
  • Superficial connections
  • Deceptive identities
  • Privacy concerns
  • Social skills
  • Video calls
  • Online presence
  • Digital communication
  • Cyber relationships
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