Due to development and expansion of supermarket many small local markets are unable to complete. Some people think that the closing of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

People
have several views regarding whether or not shutting down
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local organizations
bring
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various benefits
for
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society. Even though, I agree that small and local companies are sufficient to cope
up
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and compete with large companies due to
immense
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advent of
modern
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world and expansion of
supermarket
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supermarkets
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.
However
, I have mixed
view
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about
this
assertion.
Firstly
, having
supermarket
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in society confer
plethora
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a plethora
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of advantages concerning the time, as
large
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shopping complex confer the opportunity to
populace
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to buy all necessities under of roof , which would be very convenient for them.
Moreover
, the option of purchasing
valuable
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the valuable
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product
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products
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out of
large
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a large
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variety of commodities is
also
possible with
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the supermarket
a supermarket
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supermarket
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supermarkets
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. Not only
this
, but
people
also
get durable products with the presence of
renowned
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brand
tag
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.
Last
but not least, facilities which are conferred by
supermarket
are very amazing which makes
purchase
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more comfortable . To cite an example, in shopping complex
people
can even buy small
needle
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needles
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,
grocery
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groceries
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, clothes and entertainment amenities under one building and we get one product with different brands like toothpaste .
As a result
, in terms of comfortability and options supermarkets are advantageous.
On the other hand
, local
shops
also
have their own importance in society.
Firstly
,
one stop
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shops
provide cheaper products to residents. Being affordable, everyone can buy goods and
fulfill
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their needs , as well as, bargaining is possible in
local
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market , so personage can buy
commodity
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according to their budget.
In addition
, it
act
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as
source
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of revenue for local citizens by giving them employment in different
shops
as
salesman
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, which is
also
fruitful for boosting the economy. Research conducted by local authorities,
for example
,
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reveals that in India, 70
percent
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people
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of people
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depend upon small
shops
for their
livehood
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livelihood
.
Consequently
,
local
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market is
also
important. To sum up,
although
the merits of
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a supermarket
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supermarket
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supermarkets
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cannot be replaced by local
shops
but
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we cannot ignore the positive side of
street
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the street
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market concerning
the
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economic development and affordability.
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