Write a letter to ask how is your friend doing in her country

I hope you are well and safe in Ireland. It has been a long

time

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since I haven'

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written to you. Life with a new family is very busy, and I think that you and many of my friends understand that. There are many times I want to send a message to a friend

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apply

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or write

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email to you, but somehow my baby (Quan) and housework come, so I can'

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make it happen.I guess you

are enjoy

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enjoy

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eating strawberries in your garden? :D or maybe you have already travelled to Thailand, because of your itchy foot :D . I am very happy to know that if I travel to Vietnam now, I don'

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need to do quarantine in hotels anymore, but my finance is not very good now, so I can'

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visit Vietnam

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year

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. I hope

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year

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I can visit my family.

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year

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in October, New Zealand will open for visitors from all countries, so I am preparing to apply for a visitor visa for my mom at that

time

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.I haven'

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taken any full

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job for nearly 2 years. My baby is 14 months old now, he grows very fast. Having a baby is more expensive that I have thought before, especially the money needed to pay daycare in New Zealand is very expensive. My husband, Damien, he is trying to get a job with better salary, and I know that I should earn some money as well. I just have a casual job as a kitchen hand and a caregiver in a rest home nearby. I want to change my career from a chef to be a lash artist. I aim to have my own home salon

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year

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. Currently, I am practicing lash skills. Harper just applied for residency

last

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month. I think that within 2 months she can get it. She is a caregiver at a Dimension rest home in

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city ( Christchurch). Once she gets the residency, she will fly to Viet Nam. I think

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year

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she will go back to Viet Nam. She just got Covid 3 days ago. I made her have a fever for 1 night, and now she has a sore throat.I think sooner or later we all will get it, so I hope you can recover from Omicron well if you get it.If you plan to travel to Vietnam, please let me know, so I can see whether I can see at that

time

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. (It would be wonderful )

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Apr 13, 2022

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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415 words

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Write a letter to ask how is your friend doing in her country

The Greeting

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opionion.

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvanatges of being self-employed?

You travelled abroad and faced problems at airport. Write an letter to the airport manager and provide -your flight details -what is problem -suggest some improvements you want to see

In recent years, pressure on school and university students has been increasing and they are pushed to work very hard from a young age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?