Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, fixed
punishment
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is one of the most discussed
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. Some
people
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think there are should be established penalization for every kind of
crime
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. Other
people
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believe that the decision for
punishment
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is related to different situations and other elements,
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punishment
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would be changeable due to
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pieces of evidence
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and various
crime
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type
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types
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. On the one hand, there are many kinds of
delinquent
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such
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as intentional or unintentional and some
people
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believe that
punishment
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is changeable for them.
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, for murdering
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an intentional
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, authorities should determine imprisonment forever. Because
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the highest level of
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and it would
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to
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people
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in society.
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, for
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crime
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crimes
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,
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fine or three to five years
prison
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is a suitable
punishment
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.
Consequently
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,
for
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deciding about penalizing should
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the elements
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as mental health and it has
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an impact
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on the
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,
also
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people
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if
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who
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had
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illness, their
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would be unintentional and it changes
punishment
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.
On the other hand
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,
people
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think it is fair to determine fixed penalization and it has more benefits. Fixed
punishment
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leads to decreasing guilty numbers.
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can be seen as financial
crime
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, the law makes heavy fine punishments for
people
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committed to these
crime
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types. So, individuals prefer to avoid
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that.
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,
people
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are knowing that fixed punishments so it effects
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social stability and security,
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means less
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rate all in all. In conclusion, it is reasonable to determine
punishment
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with
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evaluation
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the
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situation or mental health and motivation of
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the guilty
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person. in my
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these fixed punishments are not feasible and it is advisable to determine based on individual
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conditions
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.
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