Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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. Some Change to a plural noun
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people
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crime
. Other Use synonyms
people
believe that the decision for Use synonyms
punishment
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evidences
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crime
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type
.
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types
delinquent
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people
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punishment
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as
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is
crime
, authorities should determine imprisonment forever. Because Use synonyms
that is
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crime
and it would Use synonyms
hurts
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people
in society. Use synonyms
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a drug-related
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crime
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crimes
the
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a
prison
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in prison
punishment
. Use synonyms
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apply
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an impact
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mental
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a mental
crime
would be unintentional and it changes Use synonyms
punishment
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people
think it is fair to determine fixed penalization and it has more benefits. Fixed Use synonyms
punishment
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people
committed to these Use synonyms
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types. So, individuals prefer to avoid Use synonyms
from
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apply
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people
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in
social stability and security, Change preposition
apply
it
means less Correct pronoun usage
which
crime
rate all in all.
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punishment
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with
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by
evaluation
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evaluating
the
situation or mental health and motivation of Change preposition
of the
guilty
person. in my Add an article
the guilty
view
these fixed punishments are not feasible and it is advisable to determine based on individual Add a comma
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condition
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conditions
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