Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, fixed
punishment
is one of the most discussed subject
. Some Change to a plural noun
subjects
people
think there are should be established penalization for every kind of crime
. Other people
believe that the decision for punishment
is related to different situations and other elements, also
punishment
would be changeable due to evidences
and various Change the wording
evidence
pieces of evidence
shreds of evidence
crime
type
.
On the one hand, there are many kinds of Fix the agreement mistake
types
delinquent
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delinquents
such
as intentional or unintentional and some people
believe that punishment
is changeable for them. For example
, for murdering as
an intentional Correct your spelling
is
crime
, authorities should determine imprisonment forever. Because that is
the highest level of crime
and it would hurts
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hurt
to
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apply
people
in society. However
, for drug-related
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a drug-related
crime
, Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
the
fine or three to five years Correct article usage
a
prison
is a suitable Change preposition
in prison
punishment
. Consequently
, for
deciding about penalizing should Change preposition
apply
analyzing
the elements Wrong verb form
analyse
such
as mental health and it has impact
on the Add an article
an impact
punishment
, also
people
if
had Correct word choice
who
mental
illness, their Add an article
a mental
crime
would be unintentional and it changes punishment
.
On the other hand
, people
think it is fair to determine fixed penalization and it has more benefits. Fixed punishment
leads to decreasing guilty numbers. Example
can be seen as financial Add an article
An example
The example
crime
, the law makes heavy fine punishments for people
committed to these crime
types. So, individuals prefer to avoid from
that. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, people
are knowing that fixed punishments so it effects in
social stability and security, Change preposition
apply
it
means less Correct pronoun usage
which
crime
rate all in all.
In conclusion, it is reasonable to determine punishment
with
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by
evaluation
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evaluating
the
situation or mental health and motivation of Change preposition
of the
guilty
person. in my Add an article
the guilty
view
these fixed punishments are not feasible and it is advisable to determine based on individual Add a comma
,view
condition
.Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
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