Some feel that cities shold be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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have different views about how to invest

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cities

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. Some

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argue that

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should spend money on decorating

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to become more beautiful.

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, other

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think that it is important to focus on

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cities

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functionality

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argument would be analyzed and

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will give my own point of view. On the one hand, making beautiful

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is really

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necessary

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because of the following reasons.

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, the

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that are decorated beautifully can attract a lot of tourists.

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,

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can earn money from developing tourism. The

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reason is that

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can raise awareness of protecting the beauty of

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from

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, they might feel proud of their

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and can have some activities to protect their environment and their

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, if the

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want to develop,they need to be invested

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many fields, not only tourism.

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, developing other functionality of

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is

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very essential for the countries.

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,

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should spend money on focusing on

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finance

and transportation of

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to make the lives of

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become better.

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, if

citizens

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have convenient lives in the

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, they may tend to stay

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the

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for a long time and contribute to the development of

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. In conclusion, it seems to me that

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should invest

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both design and other functionality of

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to help

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develop in many fields.

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,

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would

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love to stay and contribute to

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.