These days, too many people maintain their health by relying on doctors and medicine, rather than by following a healthy lifestyle. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

For years, having a healthy

lifestyle

had been viewed as the best way of staying away from ailments, but recently people prefer to put responsibilities on

medicine

and

doctors

' shoulders rather than changing their lifestyles. It is widely accepted that

medicine

is playing an increasingly important role in remaining public health;

however

, I am convinced that a healthy

lifestyle

is

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integral pillar of health that should not be underestimated. The following essay will look at two rationales explaining why

doctors

and

medicine

can not substitute it.

Firstly

, almost all man-made inventions have their negative effects and medications are not excluded.

For example

, diabetes is a medical condition that can be controlled by having a healthy diet and

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regular physical exercise while most

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diabetic

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patients rather taking pills, which have several side effects that gradually can contribute to their

bodies

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organs defect.

Consequently

, a healthy

lifestyle

can be the safest treatment for many medical

conditions

.

Moreover

, prevention is always better than treatment. The role of human diet and exercise in preventing several medical

conditions

has been proven.

For instance

, a normal body mass index along

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strong tight muscles are the most important factors that protect knees from destruction, which the majority of elderlies are being disabled by even after several surgeries.

Therefore

,

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healthy

lifestyle

can prevent

conditions

that

medicine

has not been able to compete

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To sum up, nowadays, relying on

doctors

and

medicine

to take care of public health is preferable to bear the difficulties of moving toward healthy habits.

Nevertheless

, the side effects of medicines and the failure of

doctors

to cure many

conditions

can highlight the importance of

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healthy

lifestyle

.