Plastic bags, Plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment What damange does plastic do to environments? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

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Plastic wastes are becoming increasingly serious in many nations.
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threaten many societies,their
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can
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be combated successfully. I believe that both governments and individuals can solve the problem.
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cause multiple problems. The environmental
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effects are
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very obvious.
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, these compounds are everywhere and
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accepted by animals on both land and ocean. In some cases,
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as
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are thrown their
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to
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the sea and beaches . The
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effect is medical. Most animals eat from human beings and these
plastics
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pass to
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. These compounds cause very ill in the
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health system.
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, the menace of
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can be fought. Education is the main way to tackle
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issue.
People
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need to be aware of the
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so that they can avoid
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problem. In the schools are
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about
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. In addition , the government could
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make
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recycled materials.
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a good approach because if
people
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know more about
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the
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damage
eof
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of
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, they prefer using recycle materials.
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, recycled
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popularity increases
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people
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. In conclusion, plastic bags, bottles and packaging is a
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serious issue
because it causes harmful
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effects on
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's
healthand
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health and
the environment . The best approaches to deal with it are to educate
people
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about its damaging
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, and
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also for
the government to try to give information to society about both
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materials and
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plastica
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plastic
.
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the problem is unlikely to be entirely eliminated in the short term there are concrete steps to reduce the
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it is having on the environment
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