You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Many students
be
Unnecessary verb
apply
labor
while learning. Change the spelling
labour
This
matter effect for
Change preposition
apply
decrease
Correct subject-verb agreement
decreases
time
for qualification of learn and fixed sense under pressure. Based on this
problem, I have two arguments and resolutions for it.
This
issue due
to economic Add a missing verb
is due
condition
and human Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
ambition
for
get more experiences. Change preposition
to
Firstly
, root
of the Add an article
the root
matters
is bad economic difficulties Fix the agreement mistake
matter
for
their Change preposition
in
life
, especially need
food for Correct article usage
the need
eaten
, Change the verb form
to eat
place
for Add an article
a place
the place
lived
, clothes for Change the form of the verb
living
weared
and Correct your spelling
wore
Correct pronoun usage
others
other
. Fix the agreement mistake
others
Example
, if individuals have no work, so they can not ensure Change preposition
For example
continue
their Fix the infinitive
to continue
life
. Secondly
, source
of the matters is human Correct article usage
the source
ambition
, specifically, there are citizens want
to get more experience Correct pronoun usage
who want
for
alter their Change preposition
to
life
from current
condition. So, economic pressure and human Add an article
the current
ambition
establish some student work while studying.
Following the complications, there are two solutions. Firstly
, student
have to Fix the agreement mistake
students
make
Correct your spelling
take
priority
. People Add an article
a priority
need
create Add the particle
toneed
priority
in their Add an article
a priority
life
. However
, they need income or experiences
, but they must makeFix the agreement mistake
experience
a
Correct pronoun usage
it a
priority
. Studying supports working? Or working
Add a missing verb
does working
supports
studying? If you choose Wrong verb form
support
studying
as the Change the verb form
to study
first
priority
, so you will choose flexible
job without Add an article
a flexible
disturb
Change the verb form
disturbing
the
study. Change the word
your
Example
, if you have Change preposition
For example
class
in the morning, so you must search and choose Correct article usage
a class
job
in the evening or Add an article
a job
the job
night
Correct your spelling
nighttime
time
. Secondly
, they can make management time
. After you have list
Replace the word
listed
priority
, you can create management time
. Creating
the schedule based on Wrong verb form
Create
priority
and stay
Wrong verb form
staying
discipline
for doing all agenda Wrong verb form
disciplined
which
you have. Correct pronoun usage
that
Example
, if you go to study in the morning, you must go to Change preposition
For example
work place
in the evening or Correct your spelling
workplace
night
, not go to Change preposition
at night
playing
with friends to others places.
The conclusion, I should give two reasons, that are economic condition and human Wrong verb form
play
ambition
to be big causes for this
complicatios
. So, consistency with the Correct your spelling
complication
complications
priority
and best management time
will make you
Change the pronoun
your
success
Replace the word
successful
for
alter your Correct word choice
and
life
, without make
you under pressure.Change the verb form
making
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite