The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph depicts becoming difference in ownership of electrical devices

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amount of time to do chores in households in one country from 1920 to 2019. Generally speaking, the percentage of vacuum

cleaner

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remains constant between 1920 and 2019.

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,in 1920 the

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of

refrigerator

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refrigerators

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reaches

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the lowest point over the

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the number of hours of chores

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per week gradually falls down during the

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. When it comes to details, refrigerator

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commences with a tiny portion after that it skyrockets to just over 50% between 1920 and 1940,

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, beginning from 1980, the refrigerator

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is 100% and exactly the same until the end of the

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, washing machine’s numbers

starts

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the

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with 40% and

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it rises to 60% in 1940.In

60s

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the washing machines percentage

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70%

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vacuum cleaner portion

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same as well.After 1960 the

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of washing machines is fluctuating by 2019.Turning to vacuum

cleaner

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cleaners

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, it begins

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30% and

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a gradual climb until 2000

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the

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is 100 % unchanged from 2000 to 2019. It can be clearly seen that there is a gradual decrease in the number of housework hours

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per week by 1960, it commences with 50%to 20%.When we observed between 1980 and 2019, the

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is slightly fluctuating

at the end

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of the

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