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The above-illustrated diagram compares the annual number of
tourists
visiting an
island
in the Caribbean sea from 2010 to 2017, distinguishing them between crusher ships
tourists
or staying on
island
tourists
. Overall, tourism on the
island
increased considerably between the two mented
years
, being more than three-fold
million
tourists
for the
last
year, compared to 2019.
However
, only between 2015 and 2016 do these values remain the same. Looking
first
of all to the
years
comprehended between 2013 and 2015, the number of cruiser ships
tourists
remained the same.
In addition
, the yearly cruiser ship's
tourists
decreased slightly for 2016 and increased moderately, having the same popularity as the
years
from 2013 to 2015.
On the other hand
, in the
years
comprehended between 2011 and 2017, incrementing suddenly the
island
's staying
tourists
quadrupled its popularity from 0.5
million
to 2
million
, surpassing, for the
first
time, the crusher's
tourists
between 2015 and 2016 by less than 0.5
million
.
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