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The above-illustrated diagram compares the annual number of
tourists
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 visiting an
island
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 in the Caribbean sea from 2010 to 2017, distinguishing them between crusher ships
tourists
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 or staying on
island
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tourists
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. Overall, tourism on the
island
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 increased considerably between the two mented
years
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, being more than three-fold
million
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tourists
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 for the
last
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 year, compared to 2019.
However
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, only between 2015 and 2016 do these values remain the same. Looking
first
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 of all to the
years
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 comprehended between 2013 and 2015, the number of cruiser ships
tourists
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 remained the same.
In addition
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, the yearly cruiser ship's
tourists
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 decreased slightly for 2016 and increased moderately, having the same popularity as the
years
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 from 2013 to 2015.
On the other hand
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, in the
years
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 comprehended between 2011 and 2017, incrementing suddenly the
island
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's staying
tourists
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 quadrupled its popularity from 0.5
million
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 to 2
million
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, surpassing, for the
first
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 time, the crusher's
tourists
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 between 2015 and 2016 by less than 0.5
million
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.
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