In many countries traditional foods are being replaced by international fast food. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have different options regarding snacks.It is argued that many nations prefer to eat international foods

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of local bread.

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the agreement and the disagreement sides. On the one hand, the basic disadvantage is that these kinds of fast snacks lead the nation to obesity. To put it another way, nowadays humans live in a modern and

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world, that's why fast meals more

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generations and these types of meats

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lots of problems like obesity,reduce people's

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these kinds of dishes an effect humans reproductivity.

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, junk bread consists of toxic substances and

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enough ingredients and sustainable elements,

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the nation's physical health.

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, presently, everywhere we can see fast snacks like sandwiches, hamburgers, hotdogs and so on. Turning off the other

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of argument,the basic advantage is that the costs of abroad grub very

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than other local cookings, and

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very convenient to eat .Because the community like to eat together at work

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of selecting their time for dishes.

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, these types of meals become a reason to decrease people's immune systems.That's why the government should encourage the community to eat beneficial bread and if necessary they have to ban eating junk grub.

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, In my home ,country the population tend to eat our national meat despite famous junk foods. In conclusion, I support

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they have to

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not eat fast foods.