Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter :  Suggest how you could help her in her home.  Say why you would like to do this work.  Explain when you will and will not be available.

Dear Mrs Barrett, I would like to write in regards to your recent commercial in a local newspaper, asking for
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aid for a short duration of time every day in upcoming summer. I have been through the advertisement and would like to assist you with the mentioned chores,
such
as cleaning the garage, maintaining the lawn, and garden, and
furthermore
decorating your living room.
First
of all, I would like to mention that, I am a very social person, and I am very interested in helping others, while I practise
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at my home by lending a helping hand to my family, and to my neighbours in day to day activities. The prominent reason behind my application is that I am trying to collect funds to get
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admission
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the Engineering college of Ontario, which has been
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dream
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my life.
This
advert would definitely help me to achieve my educational goal.
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be available from 13:00 Hrs till 16:00 Hrs during weekdays only, as I am
also
practicing Guitar classes in the evening. Hope you find me a suitable candidate for
this
work, and I would really appreciate if you could review
this
. Looking forward to your positive reply. Yours sincerely, Rahul More.
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  • Domestic chores
  • Culinary skills
  • Horticulture
  • Cultural immersion
  • Work ethic
  • Flexible schedule
  • Time management
  • Prior commitments
  • Punctuality
  • Reliability
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