Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Because of the development of industry, the environment has been

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the forefront of public concern worldwide. Some people argue that these lead to the cause the disappearance of some particular animals and plants.

However

, others pay attention to the other negative effects of environmental issues. In my viewpoint,

although

the extinction of particular

species

is deeply disrupting the ecosystem, the main concern is global warming and

pollution

.

To begin

with, the evidence of climate change is clear for us to consider,

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as

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global temperature rise,

sea level

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rise, frequent natural disasters and extreme weather events. Global warming is

also

creating

damaging

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impact on human life. Specifically, natural disasters that influence

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various aspects have become more intense and frequent.

For instance

, natural disasters occur in many countries all over the world, they lead to critical infrastructure damage and mortality. These extreme weather events result in

damaging

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to people and property. In many cases, the citizens have inadequate standard lives on account of

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lives, homes, and livelihood. It is argued that the extinction of various

species

is the most important environmental problem. Basically, there is no doubt that the fauna and flora help in preserving the balance of biodiversity. They build the diversity of the ecological system,

thus

, it is paramount to preserve them. We are losing various genera and

species

because of excessive deforestation in order to enhance the development of industries.

Furthermore

, the number of helpful plants and insects for crops is rapidly decreasing, making crops more susceptible to pests and illnesses. To illustrate, the disappearance of some bees that pollinate the flowers of fruits

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may reduce farm yield.

However

, I think

this

idea is completely true because there are more urgent environmental concerns to tackle. One of the main problems could be the

pollution

of air that can directly affect

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human’s

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health

. Contamination is caused by car vehicle emissions and gases released by industrial facilities, resulting in major

health

issues for humans

such

as lung cancer and other

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illnesses.

Furthermore

, high amounts of air

pollution

might result in a number of negative

health

effects. Air

pollution

has been related to detrimental

health

outcomes in both the short and long term. Obviously, climate change poses a greater hazard than

species

extinction. To summarize, I think the

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extinct of some particular flora or fauna is not the most important environmental

problems

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these days. Because the disappearance of some animals or plants

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lack of balance biodiversity,

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the overwhelming climate change or

pollution

will negatively result in all living creatures. If we do not have the greater coordination of activities to prevent

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death which is one of the negative consequences of these issues.