Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other agrue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

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The issue of whether accept negative circumstances or try to improve

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a position is partly a question of what is a better solution. From my perspective, I strongly agree that it is better to tackle a problem rather than accept a bad situation.In the upcoming paragraph, the reasons to support my agreement will be outlined. On the one hand, those who support the idea of accepting bad situations point to negative circumstances that cannot always be avoided.Since these problems cannot be averted, they simply accept

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situations as their fate.

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, they will not have a conversation with the manager if they are unsatisfied with their job.

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, they might lack confidence or even the ability to make any significant change to improve their status and easily resign themselves to putting up with things as they are.

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, supporters of trying to improve their position often claim that it is their natural instinct to rise to the challenge and looks for a way to remedy the position or at least improve things to a level which are more acceptable.

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, if there is a financial crisis exists, people might try to cut back on their monthly expenditures

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save more each month to improve their current status.

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, they have a strong belief that every problem always has a solution and it is simply the case of finding and implementing the solution. To sum up, I believe that people should always strive to make the best of any given situation, whether that involves making minor improvements to make a situation more bearable or taking more drastic action or trying new things

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other agrue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

Your opinion

In many countries, governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government university?

The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of areas such as fashion and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?