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Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students should encouraged to question and offer criticisms on their teachers. Others think this will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is argued that some people believe that in order to achieve quality education, high school students ought to encourage to question and recommend their
teachers
 related to criticisms. While other few persons think
this
 method will lead to a loss of respect and discipline for their
teachers
, in the classroom
also
.
This
 essay will discuss both points of view.
On the other hand
, if adolescents get a high-quality education, they should be inspired to question in the classroom by their
teachers
. in the other words, a set of school rules must allow offering critical questions to their advisors.
For instance
, the few particularly intellectual schools which have allowed to say criticism to
teachers
, tend to get an improvement in education.
on the other hand
, most high school students would take more reliability by saying criticism of their
teachers
, which is why
this
 system would
be happened
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happen
have happened
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 misunderstanding approach in the classroom.
Moreover
, students are not only
listened
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tolistened
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teachers
' speeches but
also
 do not respect them.
For example
, peers get used to
joke
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joking
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 with one another by saying criticisms. in my opinion,
adolescent
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the adolescent
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 should respect their
teachers
 and not get out of the circular.
Therefore
teachers
 must be inspired classmates in the class and give more motivation.
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