A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear John, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I know you're going on a camping

holiday

this

summer for the

first

time at the place called Blue Mountain in central North Sydney. I think that you should go for a camping

holiday

because from my past camping experience, I can say that you'll quite enjoy it. After all,

this

camping

holiday

will offer you the opportunity to take a long walk in the wilderness and observe nature in its true habitat. You can

also

go to a nearby lake for fishing or swimming which you have always wanted to do. But, the best thing about

this

camping

holiday

will be that it'll actually improve your mood and refresh you like nothing else. To be honest, a camping

holiday

has several disadvantages as well,

such

as sharing bathrooms with other people at the campsite, bad weather, and dealing with bug bites and dangerous animals. Well, I am thinking about coming on

this

camping

holiday

with you, but since my cousin is visiting me from abroad

this

summer. I will have to give up that idea. Take care and stay fine. Best regards, Cole

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

202 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

adventure
serenity
outdoors
refreshing
hustle and bustle
inherent
foster
distractions
cost-effective
unpredictable
wildlife
adequate preparation
physical demands
researching
campsite
lasting memories
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