A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear John, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

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letter to let you know that I know you're going on a camping

holiday

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summer for the

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time at the place called Blue Mountain in central North Sydney. I think that you should go for a camping

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because from my past camping experience, I can say that you'll quite enjoy it. After all,

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camping

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will offer you the opportunity to take a long walk in the wilderness and observe nature in its true habitat. You can

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go to a nearby lake for fishing or swimming which you have always wanted to do. But, the best thing about

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camping

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will be that it'll actually improve your mood and refresh you like nothing else. To be honest, a camping

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has several disadvantages as well,

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as sharing bathrooms with other people at the campsite, bad weather, and dealing with bug bites and dangerous animals. Well, I am thinking about coming on

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camping

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with you, but since my cousin is visiting me from abroad

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summer. I will have to give up that idea. Take care and stay fine. Best regards, Cole

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

202 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

adventure
serenity
outdoors
refreshing
hustle and bustle
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foster
distractions
cost-effective
unpredictable
wildlife
adequate preparation
physical demands
researching
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