describe a personal experience that changed your life. Explain where it happened? who were you with?

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of the worst nights I have ever had. Most of the nights I have an early

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and sleep like a log, but that

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was

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of the nights that I was going to be wide awake for the whole

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. I remember that I was worried sick because I had school in the morning, and I was not going to be able to get the right amount of sleep that I needed. I tried to make myself fall asleep, but nothing was helping the fact that it was three in the morning, and I haven’t had slept a wink. The

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thing I

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in mind is that I was tossing and turning, and the

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thing is that it was 9 in the morning. I realized that I didn’t wake up when my alarm clock had gone off. For

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I decided to have a lie-in tomorrow morning to equalize that

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’s sleep, but

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I had to get to school. I got up, got dressed and ran to school, and it was the

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period that I fell asleep like a log in the middle of the class and woke up at the end of the period. When I was a teenager, I was living off my dad’s

money

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and I was

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the

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girls that only cared about my clothes and my make-up. I was very well

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off

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at the

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and was rolling in

money

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. I was never careful with my

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and would spend it in whatever way I found. Once I turned eighteen my dad kicked me out of the house. He was in debt because of me, was hard up and just angry at me. I had no

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and

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to live. I stayed at my friend’s house for a bit, but I realized I couldn’t live there forever, and that I had to start making some

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to just cover making my ends meet. I started borrowing a lot of

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from the people around me and I was running up a debt, but at the same

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time

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I was in the red. I didn’t even have a penny, so I decided to sell most of my clothes just so I could manage

covering

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some of my costs. I knew I had to keep my head above water so I tried everything, I worked everywhere, sold everything I had and cut back on my extra expenses just so I could save a little

money

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. Even right now, ten years later I am still living on a shoestring and just saving, but I can make at least my ends meet. There was a

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that

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I was

over weighted

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overweighted

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, so I tried going on a diet. I cut down on eating junk food, I threw out all the candies and unhealthy snacks I had. I started going to the gym to burn some of the fat off. I would go fasting for a whole day and starve. I wanted to turn my body

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a body that I was satisfied with, so I decided to never give in and that I will achieve my goal

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day I just have to do things

one

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after another.

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time

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I was hungry I made it normal for myself to rather than eating unhealthy snacks to heat up some cooked vegetables, or

to

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chop up some fruit.