Some people believe that education is the key to tackling hunger worldwide while others feel that the answer is in food aid. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a huge

problem

of

hunger

in different countries and people want to find

solution

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the solution

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of

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this

problem

. It is often argued that

hunger

could be solved by the development

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the

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education, whilst other disagree and think that solution could be found in

food

aid.

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essay agrees that the development in knowledge will lead to the answer

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plenty

problems

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.

This

essay will discuss both points of view. Scientists are developing different disciplines, most of them branch out from biology and

connected

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with agriculture. One of the modern disciplines in agriculture is biotechnology which is closely related to genetic engineering. Nowadays researchers have

been

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created different genetically modified organisms GMO) which can grow in large numbers. Soy and Corn are prime examples of

GMO

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which can be cultivated under

unfavorable

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conditions.

Moreover

, it is difficult to distinguish modified plants from not modified.

However

, many

citizenries

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disagree and feel that

food

aid is

main

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problem

solution.

Food

charity can save a lot of lives since people die every day from

hunger

and there is no time to wait for the results of investigations

such

as GMO testing. It will spend

majority

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the majority

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of time

to produce

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and

cultivate

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vegetables

which

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will be safe for the health.

Furthermore

, the budget for education can be very high and sometimes with no positive results. In conclusion, while part of

population

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believe

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that

food

charity is the main answer

in

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the

hunger

problem

, some people still feel that they should be more educated to clarify

this

question.

However

, as long as we donate money to

food

aid, investigation can bring new decisions

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long

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term.