Write an essay on the advantages and dis advantages of small and large families.
The bar chart demonstrates the
number
of foreign students
in four English-speaking countries
in 2004 and 2012 and the table gives us information about the percentage
of foreign students
.
To begin
with, the number
of students
from abroad has increased significantly in all four countries
. For instance
, the number
of foreign students
went up approximately 20 per cent in the US. In contrast
, there was a substantial increase in the number
of local students
in the United States as well, since the percentage
of students
from abroad in the US has not changed. In other nationalities, however
, the percentage
of students
from abroad had a noticeable rise. For example
, we can see that in Australia there was a 5 per cent increase in the percentage
of students
from other nationalities.
To conclude, there are more foreigners coming to English-speaking countries
to study and this
can be seen in all of these four countries
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite